i have taken my
i have taken my
guitar into the
bathtub with
me once or
twice, it’s
true – sometimes
to cuddle, but
mostly,
to get a call-
and-response
going, so
fervently,
i can see the
tiled walls
bearing their
shiny teeth
.
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Good poem
Reblogged this on idiotsavants.
thank you, both!
I am not trying to be too literal here but would like to present a context of my point of view of your poem and in my own statement at the link below pose a question for you about your poem “i have taken my”.
To be honest I can see a person, not any one in particular but just a person, holding a guitar in a bathtub. However I am still trying to wrap my mind around this idea. It is probably a safe, quiet, and solid place to be regardless of whether a person is holding an object or not. So I have thought of something that may be equal to your poem of a guitar in a bathtub.
https://sutlive2.wordpress.com/2015/04/29/the-bathtub-or-the-contents-in-them/
oh, my! i don’t advise placing books in the water as you read (smile).