we are made up
we are made up
of galaxies of
data points –
to compose
a simple line of
chin, i have posted
an advertisement
in intergalactic
space, but the
responses have
been few and
far between
.
20111221:0023
y
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Sometimes your poems simply hit a home run. This is imaginative, contemporary, with a touch of science, a touch of truth, and a clever, funny ending!
i will work on it so that it happens more often than “sometimes” (smile). thank you for your support and encouragements!
Loved the imagery of the galaxies!! ❤
thank you so much, Kim! Merry Christmas Eve!! cheers, y