the last of may


  1. marlowe44

    Very sweet juxtapostion here. We, too, had a drizzly Memorial Day here in the Northwest.
    There are tiny orbs of hope inclusive
    within your verse as/like a heavy/sauce/over a thirsty/salad/ implies nurturing, sustenance,
    rebirth, regeneration, and even the concrete of
    your city needs a bath, as does the plants that
    sustain whatever oxygen you consume. Nice piece,
    for it is simmering with promise of a new day.

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