Very sweet juxtapostion here. We, too, had a drizzly Memorial Day here in the Northwest.
There are tiny orbs of hope inclusive
within your verse as/like a heavy/sauce/over a thirsty/salad/ implies nurturing, sustenance,
rebirth, regeneration, and even the concrete of
your city needs a bath, as does the plants that
sustain whatever oxygen you consume. Nice piece,
for it is simmering with promise of a new day.
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Very sweet juxtapostion here. We, too, had a drizzly Memorial Day here in the Northwest.
There are tiny orbs of hope inclusive
within your verse as/like a heavy/sauce/over a thirsty/salad/ implies nurturing, sustenance,
rebirth, regeneration, and even the concrete of
your city needs a bath, as does the plants that
sustain whatever oxygen you consume. Nice piece,
for it is simmering with promise of a new day.
thank you so much!