you are slightly late,
i am slightly early – somewhere
on a floor just
above us, over
the hum of two
someone is plotting
these data points
axes, sipping the last
coffee, closing the
folder on why
we never meet –
the sudden draft
thank you! you feel similarly? (smile)
Of course! But I would never have been able to craft my sentiments into such beautiful imagery! Forget a “love” button, I need a “super-love” button!
aww! thank you so much!!
I think maybe a few more words are needed on this one.
but then i’d go over the limit… (smile)
It’s great the way it is. 🙂
(smile) aww, thank you for the inspiration!
this is so beautiful!
thank you, Adriana!
this is an interesting concept on why we don’t meet certain people. I like it.
thank you so much, kali! it’s a missed connection!
It really is! I kind of want to run into a bunch of people now just to make sure I don’t miss some one that could change my life.
(laugh) i love your passionate response!
Exactly 50 words. It is very good for just 50 words. Seriously.
thanks so much!
Y! Freshly Pressed! How wonderful! And well-deserved. Wonderful 50 word story!
thank you so much for your continued support!!
thank you, Paul, for your regular likes and follow!
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thank you, Mary F.!
Did I post mine in the wrong place?! 😦 I put it on Reply. It was about a girl posing for Edvard Munch.
i have not seen it…
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thank you, GG!
I didn’t know that the story of my life could be written in 50 words by a complete stranger
awww… thank you!
nice see u ahead again
yes I am late… 😀
(smile) nice validation!
LOVELY NICE THOUGT.GOOD FEELING LIKE IT.
thank you so much for your visit!
One word – WOW! Uhm… is “wow” really a word?
YES! (smile) thank you!
I just got into writing poems and this is great inspiration! I enjoyed your story.
thank you! keep it up!!
thank you so much! glad you enjoyed it!
Great… Enjoyed this! Quirky …
thank you so much!!
I’m not very good about writing poetry, the rhyming , but I like it’s beauty. I am following you.
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Wow! This is so great!
thank you for dropping by!
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I really enjoyed that story. Thank you for writing it!
thank you!! so glad that you liked it!
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You spoke my mind. Love it!
aww! thank you!
Very nicely captured … Loved it.
thank you, dipti!