a closer inspection
a closer inspection
on the finer things
reveals a gap –
a loss of words,
a chink in the armor,
a tilt misplaced –
on the corner of
living and living it up,
the coast is not
clear, and it will
have to be awhile
before you can
head home again
.
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redundant I know………..love your heart as felt in your work…….you MUST enter some of those poetry contests on Writingcontests.wordpress.com How could you NOT win.
wow, Gwen. thank you for sharing and for your compliments. it’s certainly very competitive out there, and you never know which contests are legit or just money-makers!! be careful! (smile), y