long weekends have
long weekends have
appetites that start
across the
tongue – sweet
and lasting like hard
candy – and end with
a heaviness that
only comes
with the final
weightlessness
of the last drop
.
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Beautiful simile. Succinct and rich with detail. Nice write!
thank you so much for your visit!!
Absolutely perfect capture of those emotions.
oh, i’m glad it worked! thank you!!