This works very well, and you found
several phrases so fresh that their
scent and impact linger for hours;
/we stirred tomorrow/ is such a great
lead in line! It presents you, or even
us, as time lords, as spiritual
entities capable of bending time,
and embracing loss; and does so
without being pedantic.
This works very well, and you found
several phrases so fresh that their
scent and impact linger for hours;
/we stirred tomorrow/ is such a great
lead in line! It presents you, or even
us, as time lords, as spiritual
entities capable of bending time,
and embracing loss; and does so
without being pedantic.
thank you, again!