this is just to say

this is just to say
.
in five easy
steps, with
mathematical
precision

i have
folded the
promise
you made –

so that even when you
cut holes into it
you leave a few
surprises
.
20100822:2003
y

3 comments

  1. marlowe44

    Lovely thoughts. Not a plum in sight, but the form is very William
    Carlos Williams. Like traveling a blue highway, your poetry always has special moments to share, away from the crowds, in your special poet’s place.

  2. marlowe44

    Came in at the last moment, and a terrific addition to the
    Williams homage challenge. Maybe you should check out
    MAGPIE TALES over on LIFE AT WILLOWS MANOR. It is a
    very vigorous poetry workshop too. Hugs.

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