your absence takes a

your absence takes a
bite
out of every
cell in my
body – even the control
center

is overwhelmed
.
20100525:2224
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4 comments

  1. onestoryblog

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  2. marlowe44

    This one returns to the paean of loss, that
    visceral village that spawns your poetics.
    For me /the control center/ is heart-based,
    not cortical intellect. Interesting to regard
    emotion on the cellular level though. Nice
    segues too, with /your absence/ taking on a
    Pac-Man persona, breaking down into a virus
    of grief, attacking the vulnurability of your
    very helix, your core. I found a terrific heart
    abstract painting to accompany it.

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